Tips for Writing a Successful Nomination

The selection of the New Mexico Nursing Excellence Awards honorees is accomplished through a blind review of nominations, each rated by 2 or more reviewers. All identifying information must be removed from the nomination form before each criterion is rated. An average score is reached for each nominee. The top scoring nominee is selected as the award recipient in that category. In the event of a tie, an additional reviewer scores the nomination.  

Because the reviewers are making all their decisions based on the information provided, it is imperative the information about the nominee be very specific as to how the nominee meets the criteria. Nominations that most clearly describe the achievements of the nominee will stand out. But don’t forget that your nomination could be used in the Award script so do your best to tell a story with a beginning, middle, and end about your nominee. Tell us the story that prompted you to nominate this candidate.

Start early, think about your nomination. Make notes. Get a clear picture of why this nurse is simply the best. Follow a simple progression of what the nurse did, how the nurse did it and the impact of that action. The better written the nomination essay, the better chances it has in being selected.

Don't keep your nomination a secret! It is a great morale boost to know that someone is nominating you, and your nominee can help with information. You’ll learn things you didn’t know before! Also discuss your nomination with others who work with them. Get facts, thoughts and anecdotes. Transform the information into stories and outcomes. A good practice is to write up your nomination and then sit with your nominee to review.

Describe your nominee with conviction about why they deserve to win. Remember “who, what, where, when, why and how". Use measurable outcomes to describe behaviors.  

Example (measurable outcome): This employee revised the procedure for administering medications to reduce medication error rates on the unit. She developed the new procedure and assisted with implementation. As a result, the medication error rates on the  unit have decreased by 30%! 

Example (non-measurable outcome): This employee is very conscientious in delivering patient care. She always does a good job and other staff members admire her for her commitment.  

While the second example may be flattering to the nurse, it does not give the reviewer any evidence to compare to others who are also conscientious and committed.  

Explain the unique attributes of this nominee. Describe their leadership and role-modeling skills. Describe the core beliefs, values, skills, qualities, and characteristics which exemplify nursing excellence in this person. Specific examples are a great way to share the nurse’s contributions and show how the nurse meets the criteria.

Reviewers read multiple nominations and look for specific information to help them select their winner. Avoid unnecessary detail - be informative and concise. The word count is a maximum, not a minimum. Succinctly support your case for each prompt with storytelling, facts and observation. When you think you have finished the write-up, let it sit for a day or two, then go back and read it. Ask yourself these questions: 

* Does it say what you want it to say? * Do the words used meet the test for directness, emphasis, and impact?  * Were the non-impact words edited? * Were strong action verbs used? * Do the ideas flow smoothly?

• Answer all the questions on the nomination. Separate resumes will not be accepted. 

• Indicate the nomination category you are selecting. If it is apparent that the nominee is listed in the wrong category, the Committee reserves the right to move them to the appropriate category.  

• DO NOT provide identifying information. This is an anonymous process with all nominations blinded. In the narrative, you might use “they,” ”this nurse,” or “nominee,” rather than the nominee’s name. Also, avoid identifying descriptions of the facility, if possible.

Now that you’ve reviewed the tips and are prepared to submit a compelling nomination, head to our Nominations Category page. When nominations open, each category will include a “Nominate Here” button at the bottom of the page. Until then, we encourage you to explore the categories and identify the best one for your nominee.